Thursday, November 14, 2013

Edited Critical Reflection


Essay writing has never been easy for me as I am generally weak in grammar and have limited vocabulary to write a relatively good essay. In addition, to be in a faculty where writing is heavily emphasis, it further forces me to build up my English foundation.

My weaknesses in essay writing are grammar and organization. I realized that the main difference between me and my classmates is the lacked of planning and organizing before writing an essay. As for me, I tended to write without thinking much and I often found myself stuck in the middle of the essay. My essays usually lacked a coherence flow. Besides, grammar is another major problem I am facing with. I am always disappointed with myself upon receiving assignments with red grammar markings. However, this motivates me to strive even harder as I know that I am already falling short of others. 

I am now more conscious when I write and I am adopting what the lecturer has taught me, which is to read my own essays a few days later and try to edit it again. I will also ask my friends to help look through my work and learn from them at the same time. I have already set a goal to read at least three newspaper articles each day and started to initiate conversation with my friends in English rather than Chinese. I sincerely hope that this could help strengthen my English and allow me to see improvement in my writing.

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Final- Globalization

Globalization has gradually become inevitable in the contemporary world. As countries are becoming increasingly interconnected especially with the transmission of knowledge and information through media technologies, many countries face the threat of cultural loss (Suárez-Orozco & Hilliard, 2004).

In the past, Americanization might have been the dominant culture of globalization due to its well-known international firms, which includes McDonald's and Starbucks, in different parts of the world (Global Envision, 2006). Besides venture organizations internationally, intangible popular culture and music also influence people heavily in the global village. Although in today’s context, globalization is no longer solely represented by American culture (Meunier, 2010), the flow of people and the rise in technology still have influence on countries.

Thus, in order to preserve indigenous culture, countries make attempts such as promoting a common language as well as emphasizing the importance of having cultural identity.
Language is considered as one of the tangible cultures that has to be present in every nation where communication exists. In Singapore, cultural preservation is important due to its multi-cultural nature. The Bilingual policy adopted stresses the use of English as a neutral language across the different ethnic groups as well as learning their own language to cultivate the individual ethnic culture (Tham, 1996). However, the effectiveness of this attempt might hinder the ageing population in Singapore where most of the elderly speak in dialect (Wong & Teo, 2011). Unfortunately, under the influence of the government policy, most of the younger generation has already lost their ability to speak their own dialect due to a lack of exposure (Phneah, 2013). Ironically, instead of dialect, other countries' native languages such as Japanese and Korean are offered in school for the students to learn. Some of these languages are also graded which might reflect the significance of those languages.

Therefore, it is important to review the effectiveness of policies in achieving the goal in preserving local culture while at the same time allowing globalization to take place for the countries' economic benefits. Countries can therefore stress the importance of dialects as well as to the indigenous people and open it up as an option for the younger generation to learn. This not only helps to avoid the loss of culture but also aids in building a stronger relationship, as well as bonding across generations.
Besides, governments have been very active in building cultural identity for the citizens. Taking Singapore for instance, strong emphasis is placed on cultivating cultural identity through embedding a compulsory program such as the National Education (Ritter, 2013) in schools as well as encouraging citizens to participate in the yearly National Day celebrations.

Although the government has proposed these extensive efforts in stressing the importance of having cultural identity, the effectiveness of these approaches might not guarantee the most optimal result. Hence, it might be more useful for the nations to conduct public education through campaigns and intensive use of media to bring across the message. Moreover, having an open discussion with citizens on the ways they perceive to be better in promoting such identity can help to increase the willingness and foster a stronger sense of ownership in creating identity within the nation.    
In conclusion, although cultural loss might be a prominent threat to the nations when dealing with globalization, it is still possible to preserve culture by having the right approaches to deal with such an issue. By encouraging dialects to be spoken in countries can definitely help to connect citizens better. Hence, through having a strong cultural identity in the country, people are more likely to preserve culture.
594 Words
References
Global Envision. (2006). Americanization of Globalisation?. Retrieved 15 October, 2013, from: http://www.globalenvision.org/library/33/1273

Ritter, Z.S. (2013). Singapore’s Search for National Identity: Building a Nation throught Education. USA: American Jewish University.

Meunier, S. (2010). Globalization, Americanization and Sarkozy’s France.  Princeton: aWoodrow Wilson School of Public and International Affairs, Princeton University.

Suárez-Orozco, M. M, Hilliard, D. Q, (2004). Globalization: Culture and Education in the New Millennium. London: University of California Press.

Tham, S.C. (1996). Cultural Forces and Counter Forces in Contemporary Singapore. Singapore: National University of Singapore.

Phneah, J. (2013). Reintroduce dialects back into Singapore. Retrieved 29 October, 2013, from: http://www.theonlinecitizen.com/2013/03/reintroduce-dialects-singapore

Wong, Y.M. & Teo, Z.W. (2011). The Elderly in Singapore. Retrieved 29 October, 2013, from: http://www.singstat.gov.sg/publications/publications_and_papers/population_and_population_structure/ssnsep11-pg1-9.pdf


Critical Reflection

Essay writing has never been easy for me as I am generally weak in grammar and has limited vocabulary to write a relatively good essay. In addition, to be in a faculty which writing is heavily emphasis, it further stresses and forces me to build up my English foundation.

My weaknesses in essay writing are grammar and organization. I realized that the main difference between me and my classmates is the lack of planning and organizing before writing an essay. As for me, I tend to write without thinking much and I often found myself stuck in the middle of the essay. My essays usually lack a coherence flow. Besides, grammar is another major problem I faced with. I am always disappointed with myself upon receiving assignments in red grammar markings. However, this motivates me to strive even harder as I know that I already fell short of others.


I am now more conscious when I write and I have adopted what the lecturer has taught me, which is to read my own essays a few days later and try to edit it again. I also asked my friends to help look through my work and learn from them at the same time. I have already set a goal to read at least three newspaper articles each day and started to initiate conversation with my friends in English rather than Chinese. I sincerely hope that this could help strengthen my English  and allow me to see improvement in my writing. 

Monday, October 28, 2013

Edited Globalization- Culture


Globalization has gradually become inevitable in the contemporary world. As countries are becoming increasingly interconnected especially with the transmission of knowledge and information through media technologies, many countries face the threat of cultural loss (Suárez-Orozco & Hilliard, 2004).

In the past, Americanization might have been the dominant culture of globalization due to its well-known international firms, which includes McDonald's and Starbucks, in different parts of the world (Global Envision, 2006). Besides venture organizations internationally, intangible popular culture and music also influence people heavily in the global village. Although in today’s context, globalization is no longer solely represented by American culture (Meunier, 2010), the flow of people and the rise in technology still have influence on countries.

Thus, in order to preserve indigenous culture, countries make attempts such as promoting a common language as well as emphasizing the importance of having cultural identity.

Language is considered as one of the tangible cultures that has to be present in every nation where communication exists. In Singapore, cultural preservation is important due to its multi-cultural nature. The Bi-lingual policy adopted stresses the use of English as a neutral language across the different ethnic groups as well as learning their own language to cultivate the individual ethnic culture (Tham, 1996). However, the effectiveness of this attempt might hindered the ageing population Singapore which most of the elderly speak in dialect (Wong & Teo, 2011). Unfortunately, under the influence of the government policy, most of the younger generation has already lost their ability to speak their own dialect due to a lack of exposure (Phneah, 2013). Ironically, instead of dialect, other countries' native languages such as Japanese and Korean are offered in school for the students to learn. Some of these languages are also graded in which might reflect the significance of those languages.

Therefore, it is important to review the effectiveness of policies in achieving the goal in preserving local culture while at the same time allowing globalization to take place for the countries' economic benefits. Countries can therefore stress the importance of dialects as well as to the indigenous people and open it up as an option for the younger generation to learn. This not only helps to avoid the loss of culture but also aids in building a stronger relationship, and bond across generations.

Besides, governments have been very active in building cultural identity for the citizens. Taking Singapore for instance, strong emphasis is placed on cultivating cultural identity through embedding compulsory program such as the National Education (Ritter, 2013) in schools as well as encouraging citizens to participate in the yearly National Day celebration.

Although the government has proposed these extensive efforts in stressing the importance of having cultural identity, the effectiveness of these approaches might not guarantee the most optimal result. Hence, it might be more useful for the nations to conduct public education through campaigns and intensive use of media to bring across the message. Moreover, through having an open discussion with citizens on the ways they perceive to be better in promoting such identity can help to increase the willingness and foster a stronger sense of ownership in creating identity within the nation.    

In conclusion, although cultural loss might be a prominent threat to the nations when dealing with globalization, it is still possible to preserve culture by having the right approaches to deal with such issue. By encouraging dialects to be spoken in countries can definitely help to connect citizens better. Hence, through having a strong cultural identity in the country, people are more likely to preserve culture.
612 Words
References
Global Envision. (2006). Americanization of Globalisation?. Retrieved 15 October, 2013, from: http://www.globalenvision.org/library/33/1273

Ritter, Z.S. (2013). Singapore’s Search for National Identity: Building a Nation throught Education. USA: American Jewish University.

Meunier, S. (2010). Globalization, Americanization and Sarkozy’s France.  Princeton: aWoodrow Wilson School of Public and International Affairs, Princeton University.

Suárez-Orozco, M. M, Hilliard, D. Q, (2004). Globalization: Culture and Education in the New Millennium. London: University of California Press.

Tham, S.C. (1996). Cultural Forces and Counter Forces in Contemporary Singapore. Singapore: National University of Singapore.

Phneah, J. (2013). Reintroduce dialects back into Singapore. Retrieved 29 October, 2013, from: http://www.theonlinecitizen.com/2013/03/reintroduce-dialects-singapore

Wong, Y.M. & Teo, Z.W. (2011). The Elderly in Singapore. Retrieved 29 October, 2013, from: http://www.singstat.gov.sg/publications/publications_and_papers/population_and_population_structure/ssnsep11-pg1-9.pdf



Thursday, October 17, 2013

Globalization Essay: Culture

Introduction
Globalization has gradually become inevitable in the contemporary world. As countries are becoming increasingly interconnected especially with the transmission of knowledge and information through media technologies, many countries face the threat of cultural loss (Suárez-Orozco & Hilliard, 2004).

In the past, Americanization seems to be the dominant culture of globalization due to its wide spread of global organizations, which includes McDonald and Starbucks, in different parts of the world (Global Envision, 2006). Besides venturing organizations internationally, intangible popular culture and music also influence people heavily in the global village. Although in today’s context, globalization is no longer solely represented by America culture (Meunier, 2010), the flow of people and rise in media still place an influence among countries.

Thus, in order to preserve indigenous culture, countries made attempts such as promoting a common language to be used locally as well as emphasizing the importance of having cultural identity.

Promoting the use of Dialect
Language is considered as one of the tangible cultures that has to be present in every nation where communication exists. In Singapore, culture preservation is the main focus due to its multi-culturalism nature. Bi-lingual Policy adopted stresses the use of English as a neutral language across the different ethnic groups as well as learning its own language to cultivate the individual ethnic culture (Tham, 1996). However, the effectiveness of such attempt might be hindered with the current trend of ageing population Singapore which most of the elderly speak in dialect. Unfortunately, under the influence of the government policy, today’s younger generation has already lost their ability to speak their own dialect due to the lack of exposure. Ironically, instead of dialect, other countries' native languages such as Japanese and Korean are offered in school for the students to learn. Some of these languages are also graded in which might reflect the significance of those languages on par with other core subjects.

Therefore, it is important to review the effectiveness of policies in achieving its goal in preserving local culture while at the same time allowing globalization to take place for the countries' economic benefits. Countries can therefore stress the importance of dialects as well to the indigenous people and allow it as an option for the younger generation to learn. This not only help to avoid the loss of culture but also aid in building a stronger relationship and bond across generations.

Promoting Cultural Identity
Besides, governments have been very active in building cultural identity for its citizens to stay grounded and rooted. Taking Singapore as an illustration again, strong emphasis is placed on cultivating cultural identity through embedding compulsory subject such as the National Education (Ritter, 2013) in schools as well as encouraging citizens to participate in the yearly National Day celebration.

Although the government has proposed these extensive efforts in stressing the importance of having cultural identity, the effectiveness of these approaches might not guarantee the most optimal result. Hence, it might be more useful for the nations to do public education not restricting to only students but instead to the nation as a whole. Moreover, through having an open discussion with citizens on the ways they perceived to be better in promoting such identity can help to increase the willingness and foster a stronger sense of ownership in creating identity within the nation.    

Conclusion
In all, although cultural loss might be a prominent threat to the nations when deal with globalization, it is still possible to preserve its culture by having the right approaches to deal with such issue. By encouraging dialect to be spoken in the country can definitely help to connect citizens better. Likewise, through having a strong cultural identity in the country, people are less likely to experience cultural loss.
620 Words
References
Global Envision. (2006). Americanization of Globalisation?. Retrieved 15 October, 2013, from: http://www.globalenvision.org/library/33/1273
Ritter, Z.S. (2013). Singapore’s Search for National Identity: Building a Nation throught Education. USA: American Jewish University.
Meunier, S. (2010). Globalization, Americanization and Sarkozy’s France.  Princeton: aWoodrow Wilson School of Public and International Affairs, Princeton University.
Suárez-Orozco, M. M, Hilliard, D. Q, (2004). Globalization: Culture and Education in the New Millennium. London: University of California Press.
Tham, S.C. (1996). Cultural Forces and Counter Forces in Contemporary Singapore. Singapore: National University of Singapore.


Sunday, September 22, 2013

Reader Response: The Double Edge of Globalisation


The article written by Nayan Chanda (2007), ‘The Double Edge of Globalization’ argued that globalization has led to negative and positive impacts. These impacts focused on environmental as well as the global awareness. As the world intertwined, it led to inevitable consequences affecting the environment due to the rise in global demand. This thus worsens the global warming effect.

In this globalized world, world trades are expanding across many countries which thus contribute to the global warming. Although it was said that the United States should be held responsible as it is the main contributor of greenhouse effect, however, every nation involved in trading across borders, regardless of its population, plays a part too. All nations contributes to the environment problems to fulfill their own needs and encourage economic growth, US is thus not the only one to be blamed.

As mentioned in the article, “As world trade grows and millions of factories join the global supply chain, as mines are exploited and timber is felled to meet rising consumer demands, increased pollution is often the price.” (Chanda, 2007), depicting a trade-off in economic benefits and the rise in environmental problems. China is used as a case study for Chanda’s article, it is a classic example of how nation sacrifice the world environment for the benefit of its own.   Similarly, India is also one nation which carries out such unethical act due to industrialization.  

In conclusion, it is important for all nations to be fully aware of the consequence of their action and eventually come as one to work towards a goal in making the world a healthier one.

Saturday, September 21, 2013

Final Summary: The Double Edge of Globalisation

Globalization had been viewed as a negative contribution to the global environment due to the movement of operations to weaker countries. However, it is the size of potential market in a country which promotes such investment. Despite its indirect cause of deforestation, globalization also crippled the ability for reforestation due to its nature to promote consumption. It is expected that the global economy may be close to similar as it is during world wars and the Great Depression due to the uprising issue of global warming. The US is held accountable for being the main contributor to global warming yet decline the signing of the Kyoto Protocol to deal with the issue. There is however attempts for nations to reduce their efforts in contributing to deforestations due to the increase in awareness. Thus, it is important for governments of all nations involved in globalization to work together to deal with the global challenges.